
2024年嘉兴二模读后续写 My flight arrived in San Diego around midnight, and by the time I drove home and got into bed it was nearly 2:00 a.m. I was tired and jet-lagged when I dragged myself out of the bed. Nevertheless, I had to be up bright and early that morning: I was the opening keynoter(主旨发言人)at a national conference. In short, I needed to recover quickly. A hearty breakfast in the early morning sun was what I needed. I headed for Carlos & Annie's, a popular restaurant located in the heart of the seaside town. "I'd like steak and eggs, please," I said to the waitress after I had finally found a table in the restaurant. "Oh, I'm sorry," she apologized. "We're out of Special#2. We've served the last of our steaks. How about Special#14 " "Oh, no steak and eggs " I couldn't seem to accept it. I'm not sure if it was my heartfelt sigh that caught Carlos the owner's attention. His warm, caring brown eyes seemed determined to pinpoint the best solution. He then said,“You know, I think I did see one final steak back there.” Pressing my luck, I quickly declared, "Wow, that would be great. But you know, I'm not sure if I want a breakfast steak at all. What I really want is a steak—one that's two inches thick, tender and juicy, served medium rare." "Not to worry," Carlos assured me and left. The young waitress gave me a wink(眨眼)and said with a knowing smile, “Carlos is being Carlos again!" I did not give her words much thought. Then, I noticed Carlos as he left the restaurant through the side door and walked into a neighborhood grocery store across the street. Carlos exchanged morning greetings with everyone he knew and even helped the owner of the bookstore next door by holding the items that filled her arms. Then he reentered the restaurant with a bag in his hand. Paragraph 1:Within minutes, an exact Special#2 was in front of me. Paragraph 2:I was about to leave when I learned Carlos had already sold the restaurant. 一些读原文时产生的协同小想法: Nevertheless, I had to be up bright and early that morning: I was the opening keynoter(主旨发言人)at a national conference. 关于opening keynoter的角色功能我查了一下,应该可以参考下面这个图。很有意思的是,在我还没来得及好好看这道续写题时,有学生和我分享他的思路———店可能是因为开不下去了才不开的,可以利用主人公的keynoter身份倡导从政策上去支持餐厅店主……我个人扶额表示他go too far...但他利用到身份和national conference这个思路是合理的,但国家性会议主题肯定是提前定的不容临时更改的,所以我们就briefly share就好啦~ In short, I needed to recover quickly. 对那肯定是要满足下的,所以写的是The aroma filling the air refreshed me even before I took a bite. 至于为啥我要用aroma来写,因为……毕竟Carlos给出了额外的热情,咱也回应一手“意想不到的没吃就recover了” Pressing my luck, I quickly declared,... press the luck表示一种碰碰运气的感觉,哎这不就给他碰着了嘛,但是这个luck是sheer luck吗?个人认为只能是so-called luck,然后借着这个就可以点出实际上我的好运是由于Carlos的某种性格啦。不要含蓄,建议直接给出类似于ded ... ...
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