2024年上海高三英语二模试题分类荟萃(上海专用)专题10：英语作文【上海十六区二模】 (原卷板+解析版)

专题10 英语作文 编者按：上海十六区二模完整齐全，深度解析，排版整齐。 （一） （2024年宝山区二模） Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是李华，是希望中学的一名学生。现在你们班级英语课上的互动形式和内容都越来越丰富了，但有一个现象需要注意，就是当老师提出的问题学生不能及时回答时，有时候老师会代替学生回答，有时候也会出现较长时间的冷场。针对这种情况，请你给老师写一封邮件，提出你的意见和建议。你的文章必须包括： 简单描述你觉得能改变这种现象方法； 阐述你所提建议的理由。 （文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称） _____ 【答案】Dear Teacher, I am Li Hua, a student from our esteemed school. Recently, I have noticed that our English classes have become increasingly interactive and engaging. However, there is a small aspect that I believe could be further improved upon. Occasionally, when a question is posed and students hesitate to respond promptly, there are instances where you might answer on our behalf or a momentary lull ensues. To address this, I suggest implementing a few strategies. Firstly, we could be encouraged to discuss in small groups before sharing our thoughts with the class. Secondly, you could provide prompts or guiding questions to help us bridge the gap in our thinking. The reason for these suggestions is twofold. Firstly, it would foster a more student-centered learning environment, encouraging active participation and critical thinking. Secondly, it would help build our confidence in speaking English, knowing that we have the support and space to explore our ideas. Thank you for your dedication to our learning. Best regards, Li Hua 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生假如是李华，是希望中学的一名学生。现在你们班级英语课上的互动形式和内容都越来越丰富了，但有一个现象需要注意，就是当老师提出的问题学生不能及时回答时，有时候老师会代替学生回答，有时候也会出现较长时间的冷场。针对这种情况，请你给老师写一封邮件，提出你的意见和建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 培养：foster→develop 建议：suggestion→advice 提出：pose→put forward 提供：provide→offer 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：To address this, I suggest implementing a few strategies. 拓展句：If we want to address this, I suggest implementing a few strategies. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Recently, I have noticed that our English classes have become increasingly interactive and engaging. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] Occasionally, when a question is posed and students hesitate to respond promptly, there are instances where you might answer on our behalf or a momentary lull ensues. (运用了when引导时间状语从句和where引导的限制性定语从句) （二） （2024年崇明区二模） Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学的高三学生徐晶，你远在英国的朋友Anna前几天给你发来电子邮件，向你叙述了她未能成功入选校学生会的事情，为此一直闷闷不乐。恰巧你在图书馆看到下面图中英国前首相丘吉尔讲过的这句名言。你给Anna回一封邮件，用这句名言来劝慰和鼓励她。在邮件中你必须： 1.对Anna ... ...