(
课件网) 读后续写—助人型 急救篇 一、脱险类续写大框架： 1.第一步:救人之前(恶劣环境+负面情绪) 2.第二步:救人之中(努力+救人动作+如释重负) 3.第三步:救人之后(感激+升华) 二、好句积累： (一)第一步：救人之前（恶劣环境+负面情绪） 1.恶劣环境 (1) Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. 立刻，一片漆黑笼罩了整个森林。 (2)The air was filled with thick, black smoke. 空气中充满了浓浓的黑烟。 (3)The world was burdened with a sea of darkness, a sense of horror creeping up on me. 世界被无边的黑暗所笼罩，一股恐怖的感觉向我袭来。 2024/3/25 二、好句积累： (一)第一步：救人之前（恶劣环境+负面情绪） 2.负面情绪：害怕 (1)He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror. 他转向我，眼里充满了恐惧。 (2)A flood of fear welled up in him. 一阵恐惧涌上他的心头。 (3)I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak. 我感到非常害怕，喉咙发紧，膝盖发软。 (4)Her face turned pale and shook all over/trembled. 她脸色苍白，浑身颤抖。 2024/3/25 二、好句积累： (二)第二步：救人之中（努力+救人动作+如释重负） 1.Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance. 虽然她很虚弱，但她挣扎着站起来，继续寻求帮助。 2.I hugged her tightly in my arms, trying to calm her down. 我紧紧地把她抱在怀里，试图让她平静下来。 3.She bent down, patted him on the shoulder and said gently, “Things are going to be fine.” 她弯下腰，拍了拍他的肩膀，轻轻地说:“一切都会好起来的。”. 4. He quickly called the emergency phone and dragged us to a safe place where we waited for the ambulance to arrive. 他迅速拨打了紧急电话，把我们拖到一个安全的地方，在那里我们等待救护车的到来。 5.On hearing the good news, I sighed in great relief. 听到这个好消息，我如释重负地叹了口气。 二、好句积累： (三)第三步：救人之后（感激+升华） 1.“Thank you for helping me out of trouble and I will always remember what you have done for me.”He said to me gratefully. “谢谢你帮我摆脱困境，我会永远记住你为我所做的一切。” 他感激地对我说。 2. I expressed my heartfelt gratitude to the man who saved me. 我向救我的人表示衷心的感谢。 2024/3/25 3. Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude. 眼睛中充满泪水，她表达了诚挚的感谢。 二、好句积累： (四)通用主旨句 1.That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever. 那一天是如此的难忘以至于它将永远留在我的记忆中。 2.Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can overcome/conquer any difficulties. 直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。 3.It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we may face, we mustn’t give up our hope. 正是这种独特的经历使我理解了我们所面临的任何困难，我们不能放弃我们的希望。 4.综合型 (结果+难忘的经历+感悟) Finally, we did sth. （结果） What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any trouble as long as we never lose hope/never give up. (感悟） 三、其它素材积累 1.情绪类素材积累 （害怕/恐惧） 害怕地 in panic 恐惧地 in terror 感到害怕 fear creeps over sb. 脸色变白 face turn ... ...
