Marking ladders Unit8 It must belong to Carla. For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self-check Peer check Teacher’s assessment Structure and content I have organized my writing into paragraphs. (1 point) Para : I have led to the topic . (1 point) Para_____: I have written the children’s opinions (3 points) Para.____:I have written the ending. (1 point) My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point) Grammar and language My expressions are right. (3 points) There are spelling mistakes. (1 point) I have used some good sentences. (2 point) I have used some conjunction words and transitional sentences.. (1 point) I have checked my word count is around . (1 point) Total Score What can I do to improve my writing next time (
课件网) Unit8 It must belong to Carla. Writing (3a-3c) Activity 1 Pre-writing Some children took a boat to an island for a picnic. Activity 1 Pre-writing They put the picnic basket under a tree, but the basket missed. Let's see what happened. The children pulled the boat up from the water and started to look around the island. Bring the picnic basket up here, under this tree,” said Ann. “We must keep it cool.” Lucy and Lily took the basket from the boat and put it under the tree. Lucy heard a noise, so she asked, “Does anybody live here ” “No! We’re alone here” said Jim. “Isn't that great ” “Don't worry!” said Kate.“We’re safe. Don't be afraid. Let’s go for a walk” .The children walked around, talking, and laughed happily. When they came back for lunch, Bruce cried,“Oh dear!The picnic basket is missing!" Activity 1 Pre-writing Let’s read the story and answer the questions. 1. Where did they put the basket They put it under the tree. 2. Who heard a noise Lucy. 3. According to Jim, was there anyone on the island No, there wasn't. 4.What happened when they came back The picnic basket was missing. Activity 2 Pre-writing The children pulled the boat up from the water and started to look around the island. Bring the picnic basket up here, under this tree,” said Ann. “We must keep it cool.” Lucy and Lily took the basket from the boat and put it under the tree. Lucy heard a noise, so she asked, “Does anybody live here ” “No! We’re alone here” said Jim. “Isn't that great ” “Don't worry!” said Kate.“We’re safe. Don't be afraid. Let’s go for a walk” .The children walked around, talking, and laughed happily. When they came back for lunch, Bruce cried,“Oh dear!The picnic basket is missing!" Writing Topic 请你续写这个故事，不少于100词。请包括以下要点： 1.What could have happened What are the children’s ideas 2.What is the ending of this story Activity 2 Pre-writing Analyze the writing topic Person The third person Tense The simple present tense/The simple past tense Text A story Reader anyone How to continue to write(续写) a story Details 1.Answer all the questions 2.100 words Development climax Falling action Ending Lucy ... ...
