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课件网) 如何通过灵活多变的“说”写好读后续写 策略支招 读后续写微技能指导：灵活多变的说 二 以无代有显灵活 三 丰富词汇显灵活 四 位置多变显灵活 一 多变修饰显灵活 策略支招 一 多变修饰显灵活 1. 用介词短语修饰“说” 1.“This is Maya’s secret,” Hilda said with a big smile. “这是玛雅的秘密，”希尔达大笑着说。 2.“Really How do you know that ” Catherine asked in surprise. “真的吗？你是怎么知道的？”凯瑟琳惊讶地问道。 3.“Do you know the answer ” he said with eagerness. “你知道答案吗？”他急切地说。 4.“I would love to,” Emily said in a pleasant tone. “ 我很乐意这样做，”艾米丽用一种愉快的语气说。 策略支招 一 多变修饰显灵活 2. 用副词修饰“说” 1.“I will give up smoking,” he said suddenly. “我把烟戒了。”他冷不丁地说。 2. And when I didn’t—couldn’t—answer, Mama said seriously, “It is not good for little ones to be afraid—to not feel secure.” 我不知该回应什么———也无法回应，这时，妈妈郑重地说道:“让小孩子担惊受怕，心里不踏实，是不好的。” 3.“I won’t let you down,” he replied confidently. 他信心十足地回答道，“我不会让你失望的。” 4.“My best friend is leaving, ”she said sadly. “我最好的朋友要走了，” 她难过地说。 策略支招 一 多变修饰显灵活 3. 用非谓语修饰“说” 1.“Time to go.” I whispered to the girl, wishing she could follow me right away. “该出发了。”我轻声对小女孩说，希望她能立马跟上。 2.“He turned me out of the room this morning, ”said James, stamping his foot with excitement. 早上他把我赶出了房间，”詹姆斯激动的跺着脚说。 3.“I didn't know what I was doing,”she said, laughing. “我不知道我在做什么，”她笑着说。 4.“I'll get us some coffee,” she said, heading for the kitchen. “我去给我们拿点咖啡，”她说着朝厨房走去。 策略支招 一 多变修饰显灵活 4. 用状语从句修饰“说” 1.“What a beauty!” said the nurse when she came to the door. “多美啊!”护士走到门口时说道。 2.“Watch out!” she shouted, as the car started to move. “当心!”当汽车开始移动时，她喊道。 3. When I handed in the essay to my teacher, he read it, laughed out loud, and said, “Great. Now, write it again.” 当我把文章交给我的老师时，他读了它，大声大笑着，说：“很好。现在，再写一遍。” 4.“Dear me! I wish I hadn't cried so much before,” said Alice as she swam about the lake, trying to find her way out. 当爱丽丝在湖里到处游，设法找到出路时，她说道, “天哪！但愿我以前没有哭得那么凶就好了。” 策略支招 二 以无代有显灵活 为增加句子的灵动性，表达“说”意思时，不出现say,但句中使用连续的动作词来衬托其含义，更显高级。 1. Mama would look up and smile, “Good. We do not have to go to the Bank.” 妈妈会抬起头，微笑着说:“太好了， 我们不用去银行啦。” 2.“We do not want to go to the Bank,” she reminded. “大家都不想动银行里的存款吧!”妈妈提醒。 3.“I will work in Dillon’s grocery after school,” Nels volunteered. “我放学后可以去狄龙的杂货店打工。”内尔斯自告奋勇。 4.“I was attacked by a wolf and I thought I would never see you again.” Mac hugged them and burst out crying. “我被狼袭击了，我以为再也见不到你了。” ... ...
