应用文写作 学校英文报正在开展以 “Using fitness apps to monitor health” 为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 调查结果描述； 2. 简单评论； 3. 你的建议。 学生使用健身应用程序监控健康的调查结果 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。 Using fitness apps to monitor health _____ 写作提纲 第一段：调查结果描述：介绍调查背景，清晰阐述使用健身应用程序的学生比例（经常使用、偶尔使用、很少或从不使用），以及各部分学生使用或不使用的原因。 第二段：简单评论：从积极和消极两方面分析健身应用程序对学生健康管理的影响，如积极方面是方便记录和激励，消极方面可能是数据不准确等。 第三段：你的建议：从学生自身、学校、应用开发者角度提出建议，如学生要合理使用、学校开展相关教育、开发者优化功能等。 语言积累 短语： conduct a survey（进行调查） keep track of（记录，跟踪） lack of（缺乏） in one's spare time（在某人空闲时间） rely on（依靠） offer sb. sth.（给某人提供某物） take advantage of（利用） have an impact on（对…… 有影响） 佳句： A recent survey has been carried out to find out the situation of students' using fitness apps to monitor health.（最近进行了一项调查，以了解学生使用健身应用程序监测健康的情况。） Fitness apps, which are widely used among students, can provide them with real - time data about their physical activities.（在学生中广泛使用的健身应用程序，可以为他们提供有关体育活动的实时数据。） However, we should also be aware that relying too much on these apps may have some negative effects.（然而，我们也应该意识到，过度依赖这些应用程序可能会有一些负面影响。） It is advisable that students should choose fitness apps that suit their own needs.（建议学生应该选择适合自己需求的健身应用程序。） Only in this way can we make the best use of fitness apps to improve our health.（只有这样，我们才能充分利用健身应用程序来改善我们的健康。） 写作示范 示范一： Using fitness apps to monitor health A recent survey was conducted among students about their use of fitness apps. The results show that 56% of students use them regularly, mainly for tracking daily exercise. 28% use them occasionally, perhaps when starting a new fitness plan. Sadly, 16% rarely or never use these apps, often due to lack of interest. Fitness apps bring great convenience as they record data precisely. But sometimes the data might not be accurate. In my view, students should choose apps according to their goals. Schools can offer guidance on app - choosing, and app developers should improve data accuracy. 示范二： Using fitness apps to monitor health Hey! Have you ever wondered how many of our classmates are using fitness apps Well, a cool survey has revealed some interesting facts. A whopping 56% of us are regular users, enjoying the daily exercise tracking like a pro. Another 28% dip in occasionally, like adventurers trying new fitness quests. However, 16% seem to be left out, shrugging off these apps with little interest. These apps are like our personal health coaches, always ready with data. But beware! Sometimes the numbers can be a bit off. Let's get smart! Stude ... ...
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