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课件网) 5 Unit A fine balance Writing 2026新外研版九上 Learning Objectives By the end of the lesson, you will be able to... 01 学生能够掌握濒危动物、动物保护相关词汇（endangered, wetland, hunting, protected area 等）; 02 独立完成一篇结构完整、逻辑通顺的动物保护主题记叙文； 03 树立主动保护野生动物、爱护自然环境的意识，懂得人类行动能够改变濒危动物的命运。 Enjoy the video Free talk Do you know this bird Yes, it is the crested ibis. Do you know its tough past Long ago, it was in great danger. Only seven wild crested ibises existed in 1981. Luckily, our country took action to save them. Now thousands of crested ibises live well. Writing task: write a story about successful animal protection work Step 1 Think of some endangered animals. Use the chart to help you. 1. Where（栖息环境） - in the sea ：whales, sea turtles - on the land ：giant pandas, tigers - in the air ：crested ibis、golden eagle Step 1 Think of some endangered animals. Use the chart to help you. 2. Problems（问题） - pollution ：Pollution dirty their home - farming ：Farming takes away their living space. - hunting /fishing：Bad people hunt or catch them. Step 1 Think of some endangered animals. Use the chart to help you. The crested ibis lives in the air and near wetlands. Its trouble is pollution and human activity. Sample Step 2 Organise your ideas based on the questions. Then write your passage. （1）In some parts of… （2）… is popular around the world. （3）… were endangered, because of… （4）In fact, back in… there were only… in the wild. （5）But in…, there came some fantastic news. （6）… also helped. （7）… made great efforts to solve the problem. （8）… also brings hope to… Useful sentences: Step 2 Organise your ideas based on the questions. Then write your passage. 1）In some parts of Shaanxi live crested ibises. 2) The crested ibis is popular around the world. 3) Crested ibises were endangered, because of pollution and hunting. 4) In fact, back in 1981, there were only seven crested ibises in the wild. 5) But in later years, there came some fantastic news. 6) Nature reserves also helped. 7) The government made great efforts to solve the problem. 8) The ibis protection success also brings hope to other rare birds. Sample: The crested ibis is a success in animal protection in China. It is a kind of animal that usually lives near wetlands. Step 2 Organise your ideas based on the questions. Then write your passage. In the past, it was endangered because of pollution, hunting and the loss of its living areas. In 1981, only seven wild crested ibises were found in Shaanxi. Step 2 Organise your ideas based on the questions. Then write your passage. After that, China made great efforts to protect them. Protected areas were set up, and people worked hard to improve their environment. Step 2 Organise your ideas based on the questions. Then write your passage. As a result, the number of crested ibises increased greatly ... ...
